Another piece I'm currently working on (Not sure if its a good idea to post two pieces back-to-back =P)
Again, fanart. This time of Misery from the Onechanbara franchise. This one is a bit further than the Sarah sketch, though. (those are zombies in the background. One person i talked to had mistaken them for regular chopped up people)

Not bad. I think the fact that you tried to give her a realistic looking vulva was a nice touch as well. {Why do so many artists seem to thing that a woman is Automatically spread open?}

This is pretty much awesome, I can't see anything wrong with this. Perspective's good, proportions are good, tits are good... what more can you ask for?

>>483
It just feels off to me. The breasts seem weird and the face does, too.

You're doing it mostly right, actually. Her right nipple seems a bit odd, it seems to be pointing up too much. Second, where her right breast is under her arm, it looks a little odd since her arm appears to be flat against her chest, implying they her breast just oddly cuts off - either moving her lower arm near the elbow out from her chest or drawing her right breast as over top of her arm like her left breast would fix that issue. As far as body structure goes, her body seems to thin out a bit too much just below her breasts and her neck seems a bit thin. Lastly her tail is positioned such that it appears that it's coming out of her back perpendicular to her spine instead of at a shallower angle to it, but that might just be me.

Overall a huge amount of promise, hopefully you'll do another picture soon!

Attachment point of the ear looks odd to me but I am not sure how I would fix it. Looks good overall, nice style.

>>276
Ah, so they are.

Though no, I didn't see them on Furaffinity, must've been somewhere else, but ah well.

'sup

hows my progression been

>>256
Alright, the dude's background ear is not attached properly. The back of the head is off looking too.

The girl's mouth is too high and her chin melts into her neck. The neck is too long, thin, and that ribbon looks like it's breaking said neck.

>>479

>26/01/09

I a bit passed that

The nipples and areolas need to be bigger.

Redid this a bit more, took into account the nipple areas being too small and touched up her vagina a bit because I wasn't happy with it the first time around.

>>475
Her head is sqished a little.

Some bolder linework would help to define her arms better, which seem to be blending into her body. Also, that bent thigh is misshapen and much shorter than the straight leg.

Judging by the porportions of the torso and head, the neck seems, at least to me, to be a bit thin and long. Also, if you note the rotation of her head relative to the rotation of her neck you can see it's as if her head is attached at an angle.

While you have a good basic hourglass figure down, her torso gets unnaturally thin at its thinnest point. Her upper left arm is also much too tubular, it would be better off a bit more like her right arm where there is a slight bulge where her muscles would be.

Her right wrist is also too thin, and the way her hand is offset and angled it appears as though the joint has simply been removed. Her hand is also slightly too large, and her thumb is angled a bit too far out as well as where it merges into her hand terminating too early.

It appears her tail is joined to her near the top of the small of her back rather than the bottom.

Also looking at her legs, her thighs and calves are good, but she appears to have no ankles, or any major form of support there. Lastly, her feet and shoes look plantigrade, but are angled as if she were digitigrade.

On the flip side, her hair looks good and is well-balanced and shaded, and the pose is believable.

Just my $0.02, and overall it's not bad, I'm just being as picky as I can be. Keep on trying, you're showing a ton of potential :)

pfft, lies. you can critique what you can.
the arms and legs are shockingly dispropotional, the shoulders don't make any sense, the hands are crap, the tail doesn't sit right, concept is fine i suppose but generally its poor
In any case i wouldn't call it abstract. abstract has no form, semi-abstract is heavy distortion to a form. surreal would probably be a good enough description.

>>308
Were you going for a cave painting look? if so, bravo.

>>348

I wasn't but thanks. If anyone ever asks I'll tell them thats what I was going for.

wow cool, this thread is STILL here. may as well update.