I think the torso/chest is the main issue with this image. It's at a very odd angle for the pose you're trying to draw. I can't quite find the words to express what I'm trying to say (blargh, I is dumb), but I do think that everything else in the image isn't all that bad outside of the torso/chest.

Someone wanna redline this? I think some redlines would do Ratchet a lot of good.

Not bad, i see where you were going with this. the big thing i think, is you should have her posture be slumped more. the angle her torso and chest are at, she'd have to be holding her spine perfectly rigid. just relax the pose a bit, let the spine curve into a slump.

the other things that strike me as odd i've outlinned, the hand should be in a bit more or it wouldn't be supporting her, and the shoulders are a bit wide. I can see you tried to pull them up a bit to indicate she's supporting her weight on her arms and thats good! just don't make them so broad, female have much narrower shoulders.

finally the far leg is weird. I can see you plotted the angles out, but if we can see the lower abdomen and crotch this much, we should at least see more of the hips on the far side, possibly even the whole leg. its the angle shes sitting at, it should make the far leg above the near one, not below it.

but that's my two cents.

>>123
Thanks for the crit. :)

>>123
If I might, the correct approach should always begin with correct structure.

>>125
As such

>>126
And then

>>127
However, it should be noted that by sticking to the OP's pose the pic has an utter lack of flow. There is an entire ruleset about how you could handle composition, anatomy and model posing so as to both compensate the weight of the model and of the figure relative to the canvas, to make the whole pic more "flowy", thus more attractive, readable and easier on the eye.

Well, I finally got around to drawing again, and... yeah, I still need quite a bit of help with this.

Just gonna bump this because I'd still like a bit of critique on the last pic, seeing as it's the last one I've finished.