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No. 215 ID: 8c7a67 watch
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first time using a tablet, done back in august, wont finish.

Grill away bros
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>> No. 226 ID: 67ca9f
This is pretty good. The only thing that I see wrong with it is the left arm (Her right). The arm just looks a bit too big.
>> No. 250 ID: 6decb8
Her neck and head seem to be to far to the left to look natural, that is her left our right.(That makes her shoulder/arm look too big, from what last poster said.) Her chest and stomach area look reasonably proportioned though. Now for her left leg, or our right looks odd going straight up and disappearing might look better if it looked like the guy character was holding her leg up for the pose she is in?
>> No. 256 ID: a633e5
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yeah, I struggle with those things like that, also thanks for pointing them out.

anycase, trying to fix my shortcomings as I go, theres always something disproportionate about my work, but thats bound to happen.

Also the girl from the first pic is reasonably short, her being the furry avatar of my <3, but yeah.

anycase, In return, moar pr0n of these two

now this one is VERY old, but id like to see what shortcomings can be found here.

In my humble opinion her neck is a bit long
>> No. 257 ID: a7b62e
>>256
I don't know why but I feel like I've seen this in the past -somewhere- before.

The male's left ear is a bit too far down. Instead of coming out from the top of his head, it looks like it's coming out from his side. Otherwise I see no other problems myself.
>> No. 275 ID: bb301a
>>257

Thats because Im sure I posted it on my FA :awesomeface:

tonywolf is my FA tbh
>> No. 276 ID: bb301a
File: 12340599162.jpg (42.78KB, 594x374, oc anthony.jpg)
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>>257

ah crap, double postan.

Thats how I draw Anthony's ears, they are on the side of his head, though they can stand erect.

proof in the following picture, taken from an OC session
>> No. 277 ID: af327e
>>276
Ah, so they are.

Though no, I didn't see them on Furaffinity, must've been somewhere else, but ah well.
>> No. 478 ID: 601248
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'sup

hows my progression been
>> No. 479 ID: 27db6f
>>256
Alright, the dude's background ear is not attached properly. The back of the head is off looking too.

The girl's mouth is too high and her chin melts into her neck. The neck is too long, thin, and that ribbon looks like it's breaking said neck.
>> No. 481 ID: 601248
>>479

>26/01/09

I a bit passed that
>> No. 496 ID: 366ca7
Holyshitballs, thread necromancy. Well, you have certainly improved.
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