Why are they hovering slightly above the wall? And the girl on the left has some seroius problems with her legs, go look at some real people and see how their legs look.
And the the colouring is just awful, I mean this is on the level of a kindergarten crayon drawing, it shouldn't be on the internet. Put on your fridge instead, prefeably using a big magnet to cover up most of it.

A few tips:
When using colored pencils as a medium, try to smudge them so you don't end up with that "crayon drawing" effect.

The naruto headband thing is a bit overdone.

Try out one of those pose-able wooden models to get the scale right.

To be frank, you need a LOT more practice, but even the best artists take time before they get good. Look at Chalo or San Renard's early work. Don't get discouraged, get better.

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>Get discouraged, give up.

FIX'D