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8819 No. 8819 ID: 490921 watch
From his latest FA submission:

This took a while, since I spent some time fiddling with the shading and adding some gradients here and there that I normally don't do for my comic pages. Hopefully, the other pages won't take me nearly as long or else this thing won't be finished for some time.

Anyway, I thought I'd show it off, because I like the look of the wolf priestess, and skulls on heads are cool. So are baskets on heads.
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>> No. 8820 ID: 6e0578
The ridiculous boob anatomy is pretty neat also. :D Nice work Failor.
>> No. 8822 ID: 8dfbca
Yes, look at the skull! Look at how there's no way in hell the thing would sit on her head unless it were attached with crazy glue!

Seriously the hones on that sucker would weigh enough to easily counter balance it and have it fall off backwards each time she tried to put it on. Sure it looks cool, but is so unworkable it's funny.
>> No. 8823 ID: 060505
>>8822
Me:the one thing thats bugging me is how is that skull staying on her head? It looks like it would just fall off.

Jay:The hair and cheeks are hiding the means.
>> No. 8824 ID: 77ad53
Meh. Cool > realistic. Anyway,

>>8819

Panel 1: Is that a player peg from The Game of Life hiding back there, in between the tents? Seriously, what's the deal with that? It's bugging the hell outta me.

Really, though, I'm just interested in what happens to Pablo after he goes herm on us.
>> No. 8825 ID: 46a600
>>8824

I was like 'WTF?' about that as well for a while, until I remembered that no stereotypical tribal village is complete without a totem pole.

That's my guess anyway, with Naylor you can never be too sure.
>> No. 8826 ID: db0437
I don't have a problem with the boobs, again. They look a little off center (like fish eyes), but eh.

I want to say "Yay, female canines for once", but that girl in the first panel looks so... generic Naylor, it's hard to even tell her species.
>> No. 8827 ID: 73d7a6
>>8819
Is that a totem pole or the village retard standing behind those two tents in the first panel?
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The midget with the fish mutant on the left has a snout the size of an underarm and generic canine guy has a stumpy tail instead of a dick. Good work, Failor.
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Whether that are simple sausage fingers or she's actually related to Fisk and thus possesses the sublime condomed dick fingers I can't tell.
>> No. 8831 ID: 84b263
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Does somebody else shares my opinion that this looks familiar?

What is more, Red's boobs and face are just plain ugly.
>> No. 8832 ID: 84b263
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Naylor, one well-meant word of advice: If you draw all your characters like this consistently - and undergo an intensive psychotherapy - you might reach a level where your work will be decent or maybe even good.

We both know this day the earth will never see, but still...
>> No. 8833 ID: 060505
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Me: The one thing thats bugging me is how is that skull staying on her head? It looks like it would just fall off.

Jay: The hair and cheeks are hiding the means.
>> No. 8834 ID: 8da4c3
That wolf on the left holding the staff bugs him. He's leaning on the stick with his foot in the air. Why is his foot in the air? It's resting on nothing. There's just a bush behind him so his his foot resting on top of a bush? Why didn't Naylor draw a rock behind him?
>> No. 8835 ID: cde49b
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>>8819
dammit Naylor
>> No. 8837 ID: 14d9c9
>>8834

Naylor's trying to copy what he's seen Aboriginees do in documentaries. Ignoring that they don't do that just because they're hurpdurp savages, it's got a practical reason. One not applicable here.
>> No. 8838 ID: e03b4f
>>8834

I think its a very poorly done attempt to have the guy's foot resting on the side of his shin, but Naylor apparently cannot draw depth, so it looks like its floating.
>> No. 8839 ID: 68827a
I wonder if Jay makes use of the Xerox machine at his former employer...
>> No. 8841 ID: 1f23ff
>>8834

Aborigines do that, as mentioned. My guess is like the above poster mentioned that Naylor just figures they're all savages, so they all behave the same, with putting their baskets on heads and standing on one leg. Racist undertones aside, I'm rather disgusted with this anyway, since you're using African mannerisms with Plains Indian and Northern European artifacts... its a clusterfuck on so many levels that my head almost hurts looking at it, even from my own brief studies in Anthropology.
>> No. 8850 ID: 9c8e1d
>>8841 To be fair its a fictional fapfic being told by a hillbilly charachter from a fictional fapfic. any sort of cultureal acuracy would be inacurate to source material.
>> No. 8851 ID: c2d37c
>>8819

Jay needs to learn something about light sources if he's going to fiddle with the shading and add gradients(lazy man's shading).

As far as the paneling? It doesn't flow at all. Hell, you can't tell what's going on without straining yourself. Looks like three loosely associated images slapped onto a page and called sequential.

Don't get me started on the meaningless off-center tilted dividing lines for the panels.
>> No. 8873 ID: 68827a
>>8851

The 'meaningless off-center tilted dividing lines for the panels' is probably his idea of adding 'variety' to the image. You know, since reading traditionally from left to right can only be exciting for so long.</sarcasm>
>> No. 8874 ID: 1f23ff
>>8850
True enough. I'm just bitching, don't mind me. :)
>> No. 8914 ID: dfe3a3
>>8837

Off topic, but why <i>do</i> they stand on one leg?
>> No. 8925 ID: 7f9e97
>>8914

At a guess, because keeping only one foot in contact with the burning hot sand/earth/rock at a time is more comfortable.
>> No. 8929 ID: 68827a
I guess the loincloth idea is out the window as well, eh Naylor?
>> No. 8950 ID: 4fa70f
>>8929
You say that like Naylor sticks to his ideas.
>> No. 8952 ID: 1f23ff
>>8914

Well, there are a few theories out there in the scientific community, but the one that makes the most sense (and was told to me by an aborigine himself) was that, at least in his group: It's a way of saying whether you are "with someone" (married) or not. If you stand on the left leg, it means you are with someone. If you are standing on the right leg, and you are a male, you are "single and looking," and for the females, the left leg.
>> No. 9140 ID: 60b0e6
Ah, more stereotyping I see. Another goddamn 'tribe of savages lead by a mystical medicine woman with a skull on her head.'
And of course despite what was originally meant as intimidating imagery, who wants to bet these 'savages' are just lust-filled peacenik hippie tree huggers at heart?
Who wants to bet exposure to the outside world through Red's cunning linguistic skills will totally flay the priestess into dumping her religion, as well?
This is all going to be recycled Victorian fluff made er, fluffier, and pornified.

>>8841
Hah, worse than I thought! Didn't even think of taking it further and doing an RL dissection.
>> No. 9143 ID: db0437
>Who wants to bet exposure to the outside world through Red's cunning linguistic skills will totally flay the priestess into dumping her religion, as well?

Haukaiu The Hero with Tits?
>> No. 9144 ID: 6a0e18
>>9140
I am putting my money on the priestess saying something that in order for Red to be a member of the tribe, she must go through some sort of hazing ritual. Which is probably

A: Getting fucked by the priestess in front of everyone
B: Getting fucked by the wolf from the previous story in front of everyone
C: Getting fucked by several males in the tribe
D: All of the above
>> No. 9146 ID: 68827a
>>9144

Don't forget the watersports!
>> No. 9147 ID: 41edaa
>>9140
>cunning linguistic skills
no, that would imply f/f. and we all know how naylor feels about that.
>> No. 9218 ID: 035d53
>>9147

Naylor approves of f/f until a cock arrives in the next page. As you can see from all these pictures, there's plenty of wonderfully detailed canine cocks and some amorphous furry blobs with sausage fingers attached to them.
>> No. 9364 ID: fc74fd
>I will say that I think this Red Riding Hood sequel may be the best work I've done... -Fisk

He says this every fucking time.
>> No. 9628 ID: 41edaa
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>Lots of people have their thongs in a twist about what's going to happen to Pablo. So here's another sample page sort of detailing the beginning of his ordeal: giving face to endless lines of wolf women. This isn't the sum total of his experience, but still, the majority of the comic will focus on Red Riding Hood. I just thought I would chum the waters a little with this one. Since the wolves speak some tribal wolf language, I don't think I'll be able to use the title of this piece in the comic's dialog.

ho hum, another pic advertising his new red riding whore comic.

wait, what's this? female oral sex? performed by a guy?
>> No. 9629 ID: acc8ab
>>9628

It's the only line of work suitable for a non-hunky non-savage demoted by the experience of watching his property being seduced and fucked silly by the generic size queen.
>> No. 9630 ID: db0437
Not to mention that Pablo is now a "girl". So he's not even a "guy" in, what I would call Naylor's view.

...

I'm going to go out on a limb here and say that I actually like the look of the wolf bitches. Rrr.
>> No. 9631 ID: 490921
>>9628

Wow. A female gets some oral sex. Nice.

And of course, Naylor still draws a great ass.
>> No. 9632 ID: f0da39
>>9628

Is he trying to portray women receiving oral as a bad thing? I'm not sure.
>> No. 9633 ID: 4b03a3
>>9632

I think he considers it a bad thing for the guy. "Boring" or something, no doubt.
>> No. 9634 ID: 71cccd
>>9628
I like this page.

Wolf booty is always nice.
>> No. 9636 ID: cd140b
>>9628
Wow. So Naylor is still capable of producing hotness. It's kinda nice to see he hasn't completely degraded.
>> No. 9637 ID: db0437
>>9636
Give it time. Remember, this is just one page in this folio.
>> No. 9639 ID: 8dfbca
>>9632
I think pretty much, yeah. Look at all his characters who have gone down on ladies in his art. I think all but the VERY earliest examples are all characters you would NOT consider Randian God-Men.

Oral sex is degrading in Naylor's mind, hence having only women do it. Doubly so when it's anal.
>> No. 9640 ID: cd140b
>>9637
I was really only referring to that page in particular. I've little doubt that the folio as a whole will be facepalm-worthy.

>>9632
>>9633
>>9639
As if simply dating Naylor wasn't bad enough on its own... Poor Mahrkale...
>> No. 9645 ID: 086737
>>9628
The fourth-panel face made me laugh.
I still have my doubts but this is actually a good page, and I've been waiting a while for Naylor to do some human-guy on furry-girl stuff.
>> No. 9660 ID: ebedeb
>>9639

ya - the guy is a captive, a slave, naylor has no apprehension about abusing him because as a character the guy has none of that god-dicked goodness
>> No. 9664 ID: f0da39
>>9633
>>9639

Huh, if apathy wasn't my philosophy, I'd be offended by this as a submissive male.

Personally I'd love to be an oral-sex giving slave to a tribe of exotic wolf-woman. Even if it was just oral. A good slave is rewarded, right?
>> No. 9670 ID: 8dfbca
>>9664
No, I think you're missing the point slightly.

It's not that we're saying oral on a woman is bad - far from it. It's that we're saying NAYLOR is saying oral on a woman is bad by only ever having characters that would be considered weak or inferior in his world view preform it.

Put another way, is there a particular act or activity that you consider degrading for a person to do? Something so base and disgusting that not even a "slave" or submissive should have to do it? Well, just substitute that for what Jay thinks of cunnilingus and you'll understand.
>> No. 9671 ID: f0da39
>>9670

I understood where you were coming from comrade, sorry if it was interpreted wrong.
>> No. 9672 ID: 8dfbca
>>9671
Ah, so you were offended by Naylor's implications and not our own? If so, I understand as well.

Usually other posts directly referenced in your own (especially at the start) are the ones you're talking about most directly, and to me your composition indicated that >>9633 and >>9639 were the source of your offense, not >>9628.
>> No. 9677 ID: ebedeb
at least we all agree that naylors implication isn't one we like that much

i can say from personal experience that girls can enjoy cunnilingus quite a lot - and it can be fun handing those tongue lashings out as well (provided hygiene is good, otherwise, fuck no)

but why would naylor consider giving oral to a woman demeaning? is it only women that must service men? is a dude going down on a girl one of those randian "you must do what is good for only you!" deal breakers?
>> No. 9678 ID: f0da39
>>9672

I'm more of a lurker comrade. I have had bad experience with forums and boards.

Back on subject- There is nothing sexier then watching a woman squirm while being given oral, and no feeling better then when you've given her that feeling.
>> No. 9683 ID: fa9b27
>>8819 I see this picture and I just can't help but think, man that must be pretty nasty, I can't imagine tribal wolves to be all that clean down there to want to put your face in.

So, wel got a hispanic in this one, is there any race Naylor has failed to give us in his little comic adventures?
>> No. 9687 ID: db0437
>>9677

Naylor thinks that a woman being on top is demeaning to a man because the man is so "passive". What do you expect?
>> No. 9691 ID: 0de8a3
>you must do what is good for only you!" deal breakers?

What?

I suspect that Rand has nothing to do with this. I'd say that if Jay finds going down on women to be demeaning, then he's a straight-up sexist, considering he's fine with it the other way.

Largely though, I suspect Jays problem comes from a fundamental misunderstanding of people. Throughout all of his work, I have never received an inkling of the idea that Jay has any real understanding of human psychology.

Whatever. This comic or any of his work really doesn't merit the effort of analysis.

Pussy is delicious. Nom nom.
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>>9687

He's into women giving men oral but he doesn't return the favor?
>> No. 9693 ID: 9591c0
>>9692

Yeah, Naylor's sexist. Shocking, I know.
>> No. 9699 ID: 1aa53b
>>9693
The Earth is round?
>> No. 9762 ID: 96576c
Water is wet?! Zounds!
>> No. 9766 ID: 4bdac9
so does he have a release date set on this thing yet?
>> No. 9770 ID: 68827a
>>9766

He said he wanted to get it done by the end of October or soon after.
>> No. 9771 ID: 7d16bb
>>9770
If Naylor's anything, he's pretty good at updates.
But I still wouldn't hold your breath.
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>>9693
>> No. 9877 ID: f0da39
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9877
WE HAVE CONFIRMATION.

I think.
>> No. 9879 ID: 73d7a6
>>9877
Enough with that stupid fucking hat already, Naylor. Jesus.
>> No. 9880 ID: f0da39
>>9879

The hat is his only redeeming quality, comrade.
>> No. 9883 ID: 712841
>>9879

BUT THE HAT MAKES HIM SMRT! D:





Typo'd on purpose.
>> No. 9885 ID: 712841
>>9877

Also I notice he no longer shows himself as Fisk Black. Probably part of covering-up his self-insertion, or possibly a stepping-stone towards self-insertion in one of his Little Red Riding-Cock comics.
>> No. 9887 ID: ebedeb
>>9885

true

he's shifted from being his own character to moving on to a - so far - independant character that has yet to be named.
>> No. 9889 ID: 665670
>>9885
>Also I notice he no longer shows himself as Fisk Black. Probably part of covering-up his self-insertion, or possibly a stepping-stone towards self-insertion in one of his Little Red Riding-Cock comics.

I hope that ridiculous fez turns up in the wolf butterbean contest...
>> No. 9894 ID: db0437
Naylor, giving relationship advice?

How adorable.

I would think the only thing he could suggest would be "Lock up your PSP".
>> No. 9988 ID: a105b8
>>8830

I always though they were like morphed paws. Like, ya know, how anthrow is kinda morphed between human and animal. . .
>> No. 9989 ID: 712841
>>9988

I guess that's a logical evolutionary step.
Paws -> Sausages -> Fingers
>> No. 10190 ID: 490921
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It's out. Here's the cover.
>> No. 10191 ID: 490921
And I noticed that while Naylor didn't go back and add content descriptions to his older folios, he made sure this one had one:

>Contains straight sex, oral sex, rimming, and body modification.
>> No. 10192 ID: 78e967
>>10190

This should be fun. And by fun, I mean a car wreck, you feel bad for the people involved but can't help but watch.
>> No. 10199 ID: 5ebcd1
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Brace for impact.
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Last page.

I raged.

... Hey that rhymes!
>> No. 10214 ID: f33fe3
>>10212

*Heavy's Voice*
SO _MUCH_ DOG-DICK!

Why do the male wolves have canine dicks but the female wolves have human vaginas??? What?
That's about all I have to say about this comic.
>> No. 10215 ID: eb0f8f
>>10212
WTF!!!!!!!!!!
hes into trans now?????
>> No. 10216 ID: 68827a
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>> No. 10217 ID: f99b8c
>>10203

I guess every barbaric backwoods tribe needs a wombslapper...
>> No. 10218 ID: f99b8c
>>10214

Two questions: which do you think he's looked more closely at, and which do you think he cares about more?
>> No. 10219 ID: f33fe3
>>10218

Oh I can tell, I am not really a fan of animal-penises, it'd be more tolerable if they had human penises (I am still not sure why he gave them two different types of genitals). But yeah.. geez, it's the same way with all his pornfolios. Tons of dick.. not much else.
>> No. 10220 ID: eb0f8f
>>10207
what happened to her face at the second panel
>> No. 10221 ID: eb0f8f
>>10209
another mustache like in his last pronfolio
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