I've added the ability to upload .RTF files to the board.

Special note: filenames with apostrophes or other special characters will likely be screwed up if you upload the files with those characters still intact in the filename. Please try to upload files with only alphanumeric characters in the filename.

I'd like to see a story about what Mora was doing during the Night >^^<

First off, I must say that I'm really liking what I'm reading here Ms. Lamington and Mr. Jaffah

A few questions if I may be so crass:

Do you take requests? And would you be up to writing non-LL stuff if you did?

Also was my grammer decent?

>>431
You don't have to call me 'Mr', I may be old but I am not that ... well yeah.

I use to take requests then I woke up to see i was doing less of my own stuff @_@

I already write non Las Lindas stuff, the stories here are indeed my first try at fan fiction. Although I don't consider a few I have done here as fan fiction.

Your grammar looks okay, I can understand what you're saying XP

>>432

Thanks, Jaffah.

Sorry to bug you about the request thing, I really need to do my own stuff.

You seem like a cool dude, by the way.

>>404
Pretty good set-up so far. I saw all of 1-2 grammar error(s).
Thing is though, are you writing an action story? 'cause you start of very strong with your descriptions of the Xenomorph enemy and Avrin's plight, allowing for a tale of daring exploits and whatnot.
Then, suddenly, you drop down from the over-arching expose' to a more intimate and calmer tale. It's kind of a jarring transition, and it seems to need a paragraph or so more to make for an easier change.

I have a hunch though, that the flow will be much more smoother once you continue it.
Lookin' forward to more!

Chapter two, also posted on FA

Also! You can find my art and the individual chapters of this story separated on my deviantart and furaffinity
http://battlejesus.deviantart.com
http://www.furaffinity.net/user/battle-jesus/

Next part of the story. Contains rape, written from the point of view of the rapist.

Also, lack of proper stage formatting because Word sucks and keeps undoing it.

As someone who isn't usually fond of lesbianism, I thought this was pretty damn good!

It was pretty long too; it felt like it was too detailed, and kind of dragged in places, but well, I wish I could write with that amount of detail. XD

This is pretty excellent. I enjoy a bit of MC on occasion, and this is the best kind, with the trigger to increase arousal.

More plz. :3

Link to author?

It's me ;) My collective body of erotic literature is here on TGFB. No account I have anyplace else has anything more.

Oh yeah, and if you want to skip through the three pages of "plot" for the four pages of porn, skip to page 4 and start reading after the page break.

This was really good, please continue to write more of this quality and how about giving us a follow up to "Who is the Master"

They were both kinda spur-of-the-moment ideas, so my own attachment to either story isn't very particular. I might do more of WitM, but I have other projects and priorities, so it won't be for a little while yet.

Need more of these, the first one was very well done!

And part two.

The foreword (about how I'm stopping here due to not wanting to ruin a well-grounded story with a bunch of weird supernatural demon type stuff that is supposed to happen next) is extremely out of date; I eventually just decided to retcon out all that crap anyway. Of course, it's probably still not going to be continued, as now there's really nothing noteworthy enough to write about in its place, so you can just sort of assume a generic "happily ever after" type ending from here.