Bravo, Best-Man. Bra-motherfucking-vo.

Somebody, ANYBODY, get gNAW in here to comment on this.

(Also, Best-Man, you might want to watch special characters in filenames; I don't know how to get files renamed here like they're renamed on the image-based boards just yet, so special characters might end up making filenames look like the one in the OP. Files should still download fine, but still, just lettin' ya know.)

>>248

I actually knew about that before I made the post, but I knew it would still upload properly either way, so I took the lazy way out (also, it was 5 in the morning). Just to be safe, though, I downloaded it myself once it was up, and it's working fine.

Decent writing, but you've got some major errors.
Guys don't have a cervix. Also, it's really hard to crush a living person's cervix. You shoulda googled it.
Juices aren't plentiful enough to splash, and guys don't make enough pre to use it as lube.

>>283

Like I said, I'm not used to this particular genre. But I'll keep those in mind should I write some moar.

Just popping in here to relate what gNAW told me at AC.

First off, he thought I wrote it. Not too unexpected as I've sent him some stories and story ideas before, but I cleared up the confusion. :D

Anyway, he said that he hadn't read the story so Taki and I gave him the general rundown along with our personal opinions of the story. (I find it a bit too "angry", but hey, that's my opinion.) He seemed pretty pleased and commented directly on his fans "passion" for the characters. He likes that we make these worlds and these stories for them.

Interestingly, when I was commissioning my Hazel/Adrian pic, he mentioned that he hadn't really fleshed out Adrian as a character too much, so he doesn't really know *how* he would react if given the chance to nail Hazel. So there's no canonical reference for Adrian's actions in such a situation. Personally, I think Adrian would try his damndest to rock Hazel's world before he cummed himself into dehydration. Then again, he might exact a bit of revenge on the poor girl like in Best-Man's story. Both are perfectly viable. :3

>>289

Neat. I'd love for gNAW to actually read the fic and post his thoughts here, though, if just for the novelty of such a thing happening.

>>289
>(I find it a bit too "angry", but hey, that's my opinion.)

I was beginning to think the same thing about halfway through the sex, but I thought, "hatesex is fine too", so I kept it up.

>>290

The thought makes me really nervous, if only because I'm worried I didn't portray the characters properly - thankfully Adrian doesn't "have much character", but Hazel would be the focus.

Related to the actual work, I've been thinking of doing a sequel, called "She'll Get Hers 2: The Revenge". But I have a lot of other things I'd like to write first. And none of them are getting written because videogames.